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10/22/2003 11:08:31 PM |
| I like your still life set-up here. There is a nice balance to the composition, and a variety of colors and textures that are quite inviting. I enjoy the soft look to things, too. You do have some harsh highlights and shadows though, that if eliminated would enhance the old world softness I see elsewhere. You can perhaps use more diffused light, or even go outside on a bright day and take the shot in solid shade: you'll get bright light, soft shadows and be much more able to manipulate things. Anyway, nice work and good luck! |
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10/21/2003 12:35:50 AM |
| The idea is very good, but the lighting could have been better. The cheese (or I think that's what it is) is too washed out looking, the garlic is hardly discernable as such, and the mushrooms look unclear. |
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10/19/2003 08:33:47 PM |
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10/18/2003 11:28:41 PM |
| Very nice presentation. Lighting is a little harsh in the lower right corner and those images there are somewhat out of focus. Good effort and meets the challenge. |
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10/17/2003 01:16:40 PM |
Whens dinner? And where's the BEEF? :) Couldn't resist.
This is an appealing shot, the food looks inviting and ready to go, but the lighting is a bit harsh on the right and the overall shot is off, a bit tilted to the right. More balance, less light and this would have been a 8 or 9 in my book. Going with a 7 though. |
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10/17/2003 12:32:37 AM |
| Lighting is a little too strong on the right... use another light on the left to dim the shadows a little. Also, you should have shot this from a lower angle I think. And the pic is tilted to the right (or at least the book is). |
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10/16/2003 03:00:58 PM |
| I like the arrangement of the items quite a bit... the lighting seems a bit harsh, though. I might have tried it without the cookbook, bringing the ingredients closer and into sharper focus. |
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10/16/2003 10:39:41 AM |
| Only an 8. I'm uncomfortable with the 'lean' of the wall and book. Also.. was supposed to be a prepared dish. Better focus would have helped. |
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10/16/2003 10:00:37 AM |
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10/16/2003 08:55:08 AM |
| The lighting looks a little harsh and most of the image is out of focus. The ingredients are placed well, especially the pasta. |
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10/16/2003 03:03:58 AM |
| Mmm psketti.. ;) I like how the ingredients have been put out. Everything looks appetizing, the focus is good and for the most part the lighting is good. I do find the cheese? in the bottom right corner to be distracting due to the light source. 6 |
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