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11/11/2006 09:16:03 PM |
The pose is great and the expression is wonderful. A little more tone seperation would be cool but nonetheless a very nice effort... :) |
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11/10/2006 10:47:21 PM |
there's something retro about this. the soft lighting robs you of any shadows to hide behind, creates a sense of vulnerability that adds significance to a portrait. 8 |
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11/08/2006 07:51:03 AM |
Lighting a tiny bit flat. Looking up has made you tilt your face up juuust a bit too much, but the overall pose is sophisticated and at the same time almost daring people to approach you. Lips slightly apart is good and hair gives the "don't approach me" look support. Good in B/W and clothes and background suit that well. I like it a lot |
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11/07/2006 07:25:59 PM |
However, to improve this picture I would say bring a little sharpness in the eyes. The light seems a little flat for a portrait. Lovely Picture though (I guess it is the subject)> |
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11/07/2006 02:45:27 PM |
Cool hair! An affable, sweet and friendly face with a visionary look. The direction of the gaze is like way down into the womb of the unknown. Very neat character capture. Bump. |
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11/06/2006 05:27:46 PM |
I miss a bit of sharpness and contrast, but the look on your face gets me. |
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11/06/2006 11:59:29 AM |
...and a nice I must say. You managed to get a smooth image with great focus and contrast. Good choice of b&w. bump. |
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11/05/2006 05:41:07 PM |
Nice, simple, and elegant! Very expressive, pretty eyes. |
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11/05/2006 05:12:52 PM |
Nicely capture. I might have sharpened the eyes just a tad. |
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11/05/2006 02:29:08 PM |
Nice portrait. Beautiful eyes! Could have cloned out that stray hair behind the ear, but you get a high score from me. |
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11/05/2006 11:18:58 AM |
nice even lighting. Not sure I care for the eyes looking up as if there is a bug on the ceiling though |
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11/05/2006 06:10:11 AM |
danica.. im glad your back on DP. This is for sure a very sweet portrait of you! |
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11/05/2006 01:45:05 AM |
nice composition, could be a little sharper |
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11/05/2006 12:52:55 AM |
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