I like that you didn't let the horizon cut across her chest. But you might have taken a step to your right (camera right) to move her head into the higher mountain (?) area to help frame her head and also turn away from some of the harsher light on the right side of the frame.
A little bit of fill flash, or a reflector, would have helped with the deep eye sockets.
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