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This is a nice pose, but the light is a bit harsh. You've got some overexposure to the point of blown highlights on her shirt, and the left side of her face is too hot under her eye. The other thing to watch out for is shadows. I'm just working on this myself, so they stick out in my mind. In this case, the shadow cast by her nose is rather prominant. In natural light, this can only be fixed by adjusting her pose in relation the sun. However, if you have an off-camera flash, you can use it to gently fill that in. |