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10/22/2003 11:11:59 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
karmat
Compositionally, I think the white veins of the shot add interest and serve to move the eyes down and through the shot. I like how they are place just off-center and meet at the point near the top.
Concerning technique, I think a sharper focus would have really made this shot. The white "pops", which is good, but the other colors end up looking kind of muddled. If you were hand holding it, you probably need a higher ISO or faster shutter speed. If you were using a tripod, perhaps the blur is from pushing the button while you were taking. A remote control (if available) or delayed timer on the shutter can help.
It made perfectly good sense to me about how it met the challenge.
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10/21/2003 07:56:43 PM |
I like all the shades, and the little hole to the bottom left - makes the picture more "human" (if that makes any sense :) It does look like it's a bit blurry. ~5 |
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10/18/2003 11:40:52 AM |
imo it needs a little bit of focus, I like the colors and the way you have filled the frame...the hole in the leaf is cool :) |
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10/17/2003 06:19:47 PM |
Beautiful shot! Sorry for the white thing on the left bottom... But the technics are excellent! |
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10/17/2003 09:14:32 AM |
colors aren't vibrant - a little dull looking .. not clearly in focus. 6 |
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10/15/2003 05:33:32 PM |
i really like this but its too bad that it lacks real clarity. tripod maybe? |
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10/15/2003 06:19:35 AM |
Thats a cool leaf and cool picture, just needs better focus I think, Good luck :) |
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