dunno what you're doing here. This B&W or sepia? Looks like you couldn't decided and just picked a mittle ground. it's just not working. either get some good sepia tones in here or go B&W and give me some nice contrast...
I like the juxtaposition of the mountain and the tower, but the light is flat and takes detail out of the shot. Perhaps a different time of the day would work better.
I think of only natural elements in a portrait. If it is a landscape portrait then "sport" only landscape person portrait = main emphasis on the person