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Alone Together
Alone Together
CaliKat07


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Challenge: Oxymoron (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S2 IS
Location: Columbia River
Date: Oct 17, 2006
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Black and White, Children
Date Uploaded: Oct 17, 2006

 This is a shot of my brothers, on the bank of the Columbia River. It\'s my first challenge, and I hope to get some helpful feedback.
--Kat

PS - To everyone who commented that I should "clean it up", I don't have any photo editing software. Too expensive...

Statistics
Place: 92 out of 155
Avg (all users): 5.2454
Avg (commenters): 5.5833
Avg (participants): 4.8310
Avg (non-participants): 5.3911
Views since voting: 642
Views during voting: 380
Votes: 273
Comments: 13
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/24/2006 08:45:16 PM
I like the b/w! Good job
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/22/2006 11:13:08 PM
Nice idea, poses, B&W choice. Better focus and sharpness on faces would help, and the white socks distract from the faces. Lower perspective might also be more dramatic.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/20/2006 01:53:18 PM
up the contrast. 7, maybe a boost later
 10/20/2006 10:05:30 AM
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 2
Composition - 2
Overall Impression - 2
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 8
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/19/2006 05:56:31 PM
good idea but you should clean up the picture a little
 10/19/2006 08:18:49 AM
Nice idea for the challenge and it looks like the boys cooperated well. The B&W conversion lacks an overall contrast.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/19/2006 07:33:36 AM
Good take on this idea. A little more sharpness would help empasize the "aloneness."
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/19/2006 05:06:31 AM
very nice
 10/18/2006 11:05:20 PM
the shots needs a bit more contrast imo... play with levels and curves adjustment in any photoediting software.
 10/18/2006 10:25:38 AM
lighitng is kind of flat
 10/18/2006 01:52:46 AM
Great idea, the black and white could do with a bit more contrast for my eye. And maybe a little sharpening too.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/18/2006 01:24:30 AM
Sweet!
 10/18/2006 12:27:23 AM
Ah, a third one with the same title (mine plus another). And all three have different interpretations. :) Nice thought. It would grab me more with more contrast.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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