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11/22/2006 03:58:41 PM |
| wonderful colors! that's a really good start with somehting as bright and joyful as this:) |
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11/15/2006 12:58:48 PM |
I really like the shot, one of my favorite from the challenge. Love how you created the abstract look with the top persective, working with the circlular shapes as such. I like the two plates below overlapping eachother just a bit, but not sure about the clipped cup handle. And with everything being in focus, only the flower isn't, I guess that can work either way with this being an abstract. If it was in focus it might have taken away too much focus from the other objects, tough call.
Message edited by author 2006-11-16 01:25:51. |
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10/19/2006 10:58:20 AM |
this is tough to light - I think you've done a great job there. Maybe softening those harsh highlights would have been helpful.
My biggest suggestion is do something more with the crossaint (how do you spell that?). I'd like to see the curve of the breakfast roll more closely match the curve of the plate - with no bite having been removed.
To me it would feel more commercial that way - but even with the bite removed I think you could place it more as a curve to accent the nice round lines in the rest of your composition.
AH, that's it - everything is nice and round except for the giant angle in the corner - there - give me three paragraphs and I'll figure it out. I'm leaving the whole ramble though so you can have a giant comment on your photo! ;-P
This is very nice work overall though - you should be proud to have this in your portfolio. 7 |
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10/18/2006 11:12:36 AM |
| Technically well done; some good use of colour and composition. But not my favourite picture. |
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10/17/2006 05:12:30 PM |
OH SO TRUE!
that was my start for tody too. Espresso and croissant au beurre. the best way to start the day! |
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10/17/2006 03:08:12 PM |
| I actually wish the croissant had not had a bite taken out of it. Good composition and colors. |
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10/17/2006 10:31:21 AM |
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 1
Composition - 1
Overall Impression - 1
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 5 |
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10/16/2006 04:44:09 PM |
| you have eaten croissant but also a piece of cup :) |
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10/16/2006 12:27:57 PM |
| Nice colors...hard to figure out where the center of interest is, though |
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10/16/2006 10:02:08 AM |
| colourful comp. that coffe looks amazing. |
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10/16/2006 03:29:54 AM |
| 6: Good idea. The flower seems out of place. The juice lacks a bit of colour and someone got to the pastry before you! |
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10/16/2006 03:19:03 AM |
| Well taken, well excuted, and a great composition as well..... |
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