As for the macro aspect, I love the composition, and the eyes/lips are great. I find the nose, out of focus and smack in the middle a bit distracting in this case.
Yes, I think you're right. Sadly I left day 2 until about 5 minutes before midnight, so it was a bit of a rushed job. I had one with better dof, but I didn't like the compostion as much. Think I'll give it another try sometime, but first she could use a good bath.
As for the macro aspect, I love the composition, and the eyes/lips are great. I find the nose, out of focus and smack in the middle a bit distracting in this case.