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Challenge: Faceless Portrait (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Sigma 28-135mm f/3.8-5.6 Aspherical IF for Nikon
Location: My couch
Date: Oct 6, 2006
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Fashion
Date Uploaded: Oct 4, 2006

 Most people look right at someones chest when you meet them be it male or female we all do it. Its an insecurity thing. I thought this would be an interesting way to show what people really look at first.
i did nothing to this picture except maybe tweet the contrast but a touch.

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Votes: 224
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/15/2006 01:07:29 PM
I think you needed to show more of the model, or have a different crop. The vest is overpowering, and kind of makes the picture hard to read. Also, the lighting is a bit harsh - direct flash at close range, perhaps.
 10/12/2006 10:07:23 AM
How can I say this without sounding rude. This doesn't instill lust in me. The black and red top is nice enough, but the depth of field has left the neck and right breast horribly out of focus. The chin needs to be either in or out of the frame, not just on the edge. The skin at the armpit has blown out in the highlights except for that little spot bang on the edge of frame.

There is sooo much you can improve on here. I hope the comments above are taken in the right way and help you understand how to present your work to better efect.
 10/11/2006 06:37:58 PM
This may have worked better if the flash wasn't so intrusive :)
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 10/11/2006 01:04:44 PM
There is a kind of snapshot quality to this photo that appropriately seems to say "quickly."
 10/11/2006 11:06:41 AM
Definitely an interesting angle, but the light seems just a bit harsh on the garment.
 10/10/2006 07:37:10 PM
This could have been way more moodier/lusty with subtle lighting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/09/2006 02:14:17 PM
Lighting is a little too harsh.
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 10/09/2006 10:30:46 AM
oh. well the photo would benefit for sure if there was more revealed :-)
 10/09/2006 08:38:05 AM
Lighting seems a bit harsh but I like the composition and colors.
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