The actual flow of the water has been very well captured in this long exposure - but your framing of it, your composition, lacks finesse I think; there's a discomforting sense of a tilted horizon, but only partially so, so that the viewer is simply discomforted, rather than forced to change their point of view. Placing the waterfall so centrally in frame is also quite weak - the eye is constantly drawn to areas other than what ought surely to be your point pf interest. And finally, there's a blue colour cast to the whole thing, which makes it seem firstly washed out and lacking the drama of light, and secondly, not completely under your control. |