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Challenge: Free Study XIII (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Kodak Z740
Location: Flagstaff, Arizona
Date: Sep 29, 2006
Aperture: f/4.00
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/750 sec
Galleries: Landscape, Nature
Date Uploaded: Sep 30, 2006

A shot of Francis Short Pond (also known as Duck Pond)in my hometown of Flagstaff, AZ.
Editing:
crop
hue/saturation
Sharpness
Brightness/Contrast
Clone
Levels

Statistics
Place: 264 out of 615
Avg (all users): 5.6735
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 5.6667
Avg (non-participants): 5.6957
Views since voting: 831
Views during voting: 264
Votes: 196
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)


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10/11/2006 03:55:44 PM
Critique club Review:

Focus and depth of field are excellent.

Color, saturation, and hue are done well.

An earlier, or later in the day, exposure would have been preferrable. By the shadows, it looks like the picture was taken around high noon. Which leaves the lighting a little flat. Hours 10 - 2 are not the best for straight natural lighting. This might have also helped reduce the brown colors in the water. A neutral density filter and a longer exposure could have smoothed the water a bit more too. I'd go for the glassy smooth, as there is no way I know of to get huge waves in a duck pond.

The horizon line is a bit centered, but is nice and level.

You've already heard about the border. Some voters hate them, no matter what they look like. In this case, it is a little heavy. It starts to over power the picture. Had you mad eteh outer line the width of the inner, it would not have been so overly strong.

Overall, a pretty image, and would make a nice postcard.

Message edited by author 2006-10-11 15:56:25.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/07/2006 09:16:56 PM
Border is too much for such a good image
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10/04/2006 07:45:44 AM
Nice landscape, reminds ,me of a postcard. Nice shot
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10/03/2006 11:18:11 PM
This would be a good shot if there werent so much sky. As is, the photo feels split in half... and just doesnt work well.
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10/03/2006 03:45:19 AM
a very sharp shot...nice calm water...good colors, although perhaps about a week too early for the peak
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10/02/2006 09:20:52 PM
pretty .. water color kind of dull but sky is great 5
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10/02/2006 04:12:12 PM
A good backdrop on this land/water-scape.
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10/02/2006 12:01:40 PM
take advantage of the 720 pixels next time. especially with the chunky border. 6
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10/01/2006 11:01:25 PM
Would like to see this one at an earlier or later time in the day.
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10/01/2006 08:08:13 AM
Good picture. Bad frame.
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