First layer, lab conversion and adjustments in curves clipping darks and lights, blemish removals.
Second layer, diffusion glow, lights.
Third layer diffusion glow mid tones.
Fourth layer noise reduction dark areas
Layer five noise reduction uniforms
Layer six highlights sharpening
Layer seven sharpening
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some tecnical error, crop on the foot,not a great sharpness the lights can be better (more soft the shadows)... the shot can be better. the model is beautiful(I liken't the ring on the finger) I think that will see better works in future. 5
I'm sorry but if you had this very hot girl at your disposal for a shoot, and this was the best of the shoot... The lighting here is very poor. Nothing is really in focus. Maybe you were going for a soft focus approach, but it's not working here. Strangely I think this would be about 10 times better rotated 90 degrees clockwise. Then it would be a sexy pose even if it would appear as if she were hovering. Sorry to be harsh, but I could kick you for teasing me with this pretty women and not delivering.
I can't really tell if she's on the floor or not-? Looks a bit awkward but at the same time kind of neat too. I guess my main criticism is the lack of light on her face.
Your model is lovely and her position and expression is nice. I think she needs a bit more golden soft lighting on her face (closer to what she has on her forearm & bicep). IMO the floor takes a lot away from this shot. Maybe a plush red, black, or dark green back would work better.
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