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A lovely day gone astray
A lovely day gone astray
veganmegan23


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Challenge: Rain II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Kodak DX6440
Location: backyard
Date: Sep 24, 2006
Date Uploaded: Sep 26, 2006

 Well it didnt rain all week so i was forced to get crafty and use the hose to show rain. Any advice you could give is great because it's only my second one. I had a really safe picture for purple to put in but i just wanted some comments for this one to learn a little. thank you.

p.s i had to lower the quality to make it small enough =/ not sure why it wouldntload it before the size was right

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Place: 127 out of 128
Avg (all users): 3.8138
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 3.7308
Avg (non-participants): 3.8292
Views since voting: 735
Views during voting: 439
Votes: 333
Comments: 8
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 10/05/2006 03:32:18 PM
In the context of the rain challenge, the picture needs to shout "rain" a little more clearly. This could be acheived by change your light source direction to side light or back light the drops. Or, to show that rain is falling or has fallen, then just move in a little closer and isolate on an interesting detail. See the blue in this challenge for example and Scalverts shot is a good example of using light direction to really show off the drops.

Also, a busy BG like you have in this pic overwhelms the rest of the picture.

Keep shooting and dont worry about the score.
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 10/04/2006 11:55:46 AM
I don't think you really deserved the "brown ribbon" for this. It was a good attempt for an enticing picture.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/03/2006 10:35:12 AM
Is there rain!!. May be after effect of rain I guess. Good picture.
 10/01/2006 12:39:19 PM
Sorry... nothing to see here really. No detail, the vegetation makes the whole pic look like a mess. And the glass/pearls combo really doesn't work.
 09/30/2006 09:28:38 PM
Artistic, novel composition, pleasant to look at. I don't understand the symbolism of the glass and necklace, though.
 09/28/2006 09:29:26 AM
i dont know if the angle helps here. because there's lots in the photo to look at, i feel like i have to turn my head in an angle to figure out what im looking at.
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 09/27/2006 05:45:54 PM
Can't make much sense of what's happening here.
 09/27/2006 02:30:40 PM
The strange angle of this photo doesnt work as on first look I have to ask myself "what is that?"
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