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10/06/2006 02:15:09 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Composition:
The position of the kitty and his whiskers leading from the bottom left corner is good, I would like to have seen all the whiskers in the frame and possibly a little more negative space to the right of them. I agree with your commenters that the white in the background on the left is quite distracting and may have lost you a viewer points with the voters.
Technicals:
Love the sharpness in the whiskers. Nice use of depth of field and focus, a little brighter lighting on the kitty may have helped but other than that I think this a 'technically' pretty good.
My personal thought:
I am really surprised this didn't score higher! The only other reason I can think of is its possibly easily recognisable at first glance which may have given you a few less points.
Look forward to seeing more images of your lovely 'model'! :o)
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
- Natalya :o) |
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10/01/2006 03:15:25 PM |
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09/26/2006 11:29:01 PM |
| This is a nice shot but I find the vertical white background section a bit distracting. It takes away from the organic feel to the rest of the shot. Great idea. Did you get a release from the model? |
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09/26/2006 07:22:30 PM |
| how happy was kitty about having it's picture taken? |
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09/26/2006 02:00:40 PM |
..whiskers on kittens...
very nice. i wish the white rectangle on the left wasn't in the shot. |
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09/26/2006 01:27:41 PM |
| amazing job on how sharp this is |
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09/25/2006 11:31:35 PM |
| mine too........nice take..... |
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09/25/2006 02:11:58 PM |
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09/25/2006 01:55:15 AM |
| this is what i was hoping to see in this challenge! wonderful& simple! 10 |
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