We had advanced editing - I think cloning the cable running from the roof of the little house out would have greatly improved your photo as well as darkening the sky. I love the colors of the buildings in the background as well as the motion of the person . Your crop and focus are nice too. Good luck to ya!
Great idea, great composition, but the difference in brightness hurts it in my opinion. The contrail in the sky does as well. I would have removed that from the picture and brightened up the right hand side just a little to make up if the difference. Also the buildings look a little over exposed as the lights in the windows are starting to blossom a bit too much. Dont take this the wrong way though... I really like what you did.