From a constructive viewpoint... Pay special attention to the BG as the tree branch is distracting. You might also consider moving her just a smidge so the sun isn't hitting the side of her face at 90 deg. I think the pose is nice, might even consider cropping just a little tighter, or loosen it up so her hand isn't chopped. Also, i didn't see your aperature setting but shot more wide open woudl give more pleasing blur to the BG, negating some of the distraction of the tree branch.
Not an expert here, but just a couple of things to think about. |