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Challenge: Leading Lines III (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Nikon D50
Lens: Tamron AF 100-300mm f/5-6.3 for Nikon
Location: Endicott , New York - American Legion
Date: Sep 16, 2006
Aperture: auto
ISO: auto
Shutter: auto
Galleries: Wedding, Children
Date Uploaded: Sep 19, 2006

This was taken at a wedding, the ringbearer was very anxious to go inside the hall.

Statistics
Place: 286 out of 294
Avg (all users): 4.0838
Avg (commenters): 3.7500
Avg (participants): 3.9481
Avg (non-participants): 4.1754
Views since voting: 746
Views during voting: 238
Votes: 191
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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10/02/2006 12:24:50 PM
Hello from the Critique Club!

The first thing I noticed was the two large white bands. They really steal the impact of this shot by drawing your attention away from the boy. I believe this was the fatal flaw to this photo and the reason it scored so low. Cropping the white out would have helped the composition of this shot a lot.

You had great timing on capturing this shot. You were able to capture this before he realized that he was staring at a camera and a look of surprise took over. I can just imagine that half a second later, he was gone!

I see from your profile that this is your first entry. Welcome To DPC!!! This is a great site to really learn about photography and watch your own experience grow!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/26/2006 07:24:40 AM
I don't see the lines here
09/23/2006 01:40:35 PM
The white border is really distracting, but a cute shot.
09/20/2006 12:34:25 PM
this is more like "frame within the frame" approach. but the shot is very nice.
09/20/2006 12:07:34 PM
I don't get the feeling of leading lines here. The subject is great. I actually like the photo, especailly the focus and colors. The broad white borders top and bottom don't really add.
09/20/2006 09:08:23 AM
This is more for framed than leading lines.


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