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10/02/2006 12:24:50 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
The first thing I noticed was the two large white bands. They really steal the impact of this shot by drawing your attention away from the boy. I believe this was the fatal flaw to this photo and the reason it scored so low. Cropping the white out would have helped the composition of this shot a lot.
You had great timing on capturing this shot. You were able to capture this before he realized that he was staring at a camera and a look of surprise took over. I can just imagine that half a second later, he was gone!
I see from your profile that this is your first entry. Welcome To DPC!!! This is a great site to really learn about photography and watch your own experience grow! |
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09/26/2006 07:24:40 AM |
| I don't see the lines here |
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09/23/2006 01:40:35 PM |
| The white border is really distracting, but a cute shot. |
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09/20/2006 12:34:25 PM |
| this is more like "frame within the frame" approach. but the shot is very nice. |
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09/20/2006 12:07:34 PM |
| I don't get the feeling of leading lines here. The subject is great. I actually like the photo, especailly the focus and colors. The broad white borders top and bottom don't really add. |
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09/20/2006 09:08:23 AM |
| This is more for framed than leading lines. |
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