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10/03/2006 04:38:55 AM |
Hey from the Critique club
Fits The Challenge - Ummm sure, but the motive is not very intresting.
Composition - I would say you need to check out things like rule of thirds and stuff just to get your composition running.
Background - Blue? Not very intresting.
Digital Processing - Is there actually any?
My Opinion - I am not impressed with this image and I will not even take the border into my considiration. People have different views about borders and I think neither for or against them.
Well to the image, The subject is not very intresting, its from a very simple angle and I think that this sure could have been a good photo with some angle work and then some cool B&W conversion or something.
Well I don't know how much more I can say about this.
I hope you don't take this personaly becouse I think people should get harsh critique when they don't do a good enough job.
Regards, Hjalti |
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09/26/2006 05:39:15 PM |
| The border is too thick. It distracts from your otherwise interesting pic. |
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09/26/2006 05:19:45 PM |
| I really like this composition, but not sure if the frame works well (I should refrain from commenting on that :) as I am not good at chosing frames myself) Good shot, I hope it does well. |
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09/22/2006 01:10:21 PM |
| This shouts electricity! Well titled also. The simple blue sky contrasts well with the pole and lines. Good luck in the challenge. |
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09/21/2006 12:47:28 AM |
| This is the best example of ugly overhead wiring so far but it misses the broader issues of social and environmental issues. |
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09/20/2006 06:56:48 PM |
| good title. unneccessary double border, blakc woudl suffice. cutting off the lamp si a distracting move. i still liek the photo. 8. |
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09/20/2006 09:08:30 AM |
| Great idea, I would have been tempted to crop all of the lamp on the right handside out of the shot as I think its a little distracting. I do like the light on the post against the colour of the sky :o) |
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09/20/2006 04:59:23 AM |
| Nice composition. Attractive image. Frame helps it play out well. |
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09/20/2006 01:33:48 AM |
| I like this, but I think the white line in the frame distracts... |
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