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Challenge: Seed (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 USM Macro
Location: New York, New York---In my kitchen
Date: Sep 17, 2006
Aperture: f9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Macro, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Sep 17, 2006

Raw image. Cropped to close-up. Minor adjustments in Photoshop Raw. Fixed a flaw in one of the bagels. Saved for web.

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Place: 145 out of 163
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Votes: 142
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09/30/2006 02:18:46 PM
Critique Club Review:

Focus is very good. Depth of field starts to soften at the front of the foreground bagel.

Color appears a bit odd here. Particularly on the bagel to the left. Almost a greenish hue, to my eye.

The seeds are so many, so varied, so scattered, that the bagels come across as the subject instead.

I have to agree the lighting comes across as harsh and cold. The reflection off the left bagel is the reason here. I would recommend a different background also. The background comes off as gray, and unappetizing. A colored cloth or something in earth tones would help.

As is, this picture would not make me want to eat those bagels. Which, if you want the viewer to appreciate and like the picture and the seeds, I feel it should do.

Photographing food is tricky. If it doesn't turn out appealing, then because it is food, people seem to react more strongly in the negative direction.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/23/2006 05:17:41 PM
Those are my favorites too.
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09/22/2006 04:56:43 PM
A different concept, and nicely lighted and photographed.
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09/20/2006 07:09:25 AM
Creative and different.
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09/19/2006 07:28:21 PM
That looks like one of those ghastly "everything" bagles on the right ;-) I am a poppy/sesame fan...
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09/18/2006 06:43:38 PM
Yum! My favorite food.
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09/18/2006 12:16:50 AM
lighting (flash?) is quite harsh
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