Critique Club Review:
Focus is very good. The setting sun sort of burns a hole through the middle of the picture for me.
The large dark area is a little distracting. The taller seeds do not hold their own against the texture of the sky.
What would have really worked for me, is contrary to your other suggestion. Instead of crop the dark space out, crop where darker blue sky starts. This leave the lower seeds intact, and makes for a more dramatic contrast. At least to my eye.
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