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09/16/2006 11:33:39 AM |
I agree about the woman in white being a distraction. Her white blouse just stands out too much. Also, it looks like the couple sitting are detatched from the rest of the group because of the free space around them. It would have been better had you filled that space (a good candidate is the woman in black standing on the lower right in front) or moved them over and up one step. Usually, if you have someone sitting and everyone else standing, the sitters are placed in the middle and everyone else grouped around. These are usually people a little more important than the others... for instance the parents or grandparents, the boss, etc.
The steps are a good idea, you did very well with exposure, lighting, focus, etc. And you almost did a very good job with placement.
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09/16/2006 10:41:48 AM |
Over all well done-- good focus and light.
The gal with the white shirt is out of sequence to my eye.
Her shirt is very bright and I think she needs to be moved to the left a bit to balance the shot. Maybe have her seated. |
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09/16/2006 10:03:15 AM |
| Nice shot for a brochure... I agree with the tilt comment though. The wall on the left seems straight, but the wall and railing post on the right aren't vertical, which I think lends to the tilted feeling. Any chance you can tweak the perspective of it to straighten everything up? Nicely done! |
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09/16/2006 09:59:21 AM |
| I think I would rotate it ever so slightly to the right. All the lines in the image probably enhance the effect, but the people do appear to be tilted to the left all on their own. |
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09/16/2006 08:08:30 AM |
| Definitely an inviting pic.. Quite appropriate for a brochure. Good job! |
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09/16/2006 07:55:36 AM |
| Nice picture.....i like it... |
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