|Hello from the Critique Club,
Well, from reading your own comments on your entry, you are more than aware of the lighting issues this image has. But I do give you credit for coming up with a creative idea. Actually, if you would have dropped the Washington part of image and put this against a black background, the Pythagorean's laser light show has a lot of potential. The red lasers on the black base work really well and the contrasting color on the letters was a good choice. With a black background, you could have concentrated on the lighting for the triangle and letters and you would have ended up with a unique entry for this challenge. Keep up the creative thinking, as that is the hardest part to learn in photography.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.