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11/30/2007 03:56:01 PM |
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09/14/2006 02:01:12 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Exposure, lighting and contrast are all good in this piece. Focus and depth of field are done very well.
I wouldn't have amputated the diver's feet. He's going to need them. The person in the water is a distraction where (s)he is. Either a different camera angle, or relocating the swimmer so that it looks like the diver is taking the plunge to join the swimmer, would have worked well. I would not remove the swimmer. For me, the swimmer helps tell the story as to why the diver is taking the plunge. However, at this angle and distance, the swimmer tends to pull the eye out of the frame.
Although this was a basic edititng challenge, were I going for an advanced challenge, or going to print the image for my wall, I would have removed the small island in the background. It breaks up the smooth flow of the shorline a bit, and without it the solitude is magnified.
Overall I like the photo a lot. It tells a story, and captures the feeling of the title. Good job! |
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09/13/2006 11:45:46 AM |
| I didn't vote in this challenge, but nice shot! look how the ripples in the water form perspective lines. exciting picture. |
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09/11/2006 09:32:30 AM |
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09/08/2006 08:24:23 PM |
| i like the composition and the contrast of the figure against the ripples in the water. |
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09/08/2006 10:43:46 AM |
| Nice...the guy stands out well. I wouldnt crop of his feet but instead the other person swimming, its bit distracting from concentration of main object. |
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09/08/2006 01:34:01 AM |
| Clean shot and nice tones. Good luck! |
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09/07/2006 09:52:31 AM |
| Anticipation is indeed a nice part of life. 8. |
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09/07/2006 09:38:45 AM |
| Great setting, and good idea. Here's what I think would make it better: nobody in the water, model's arms in the same angle, and probably, in colour, and shot more from behind. Just my thoughts. |
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09/07/2006 05:57:06 AM |
| including all of his feet would make this image stronger |
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09/07/2006 05:18:42 AM |
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09/06/2006 12:46:32 PM |
| this is beautiful. love the black and white nuances! 10 |
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09/06/2006 11:35:25 AM |
| Very nice b.w. study. 7 on first pass. |
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09/06/2006 08:55:35 AM |
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09/06/2006 03:31:35 AM |
| I find the crop too tigh: I think such a shot could be improved keeping the feet in the crop |
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