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09/07/2006 09:00:33 PM |
| Now that's something you don't see every day. |
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09/07/2006 11:33:35 AM |
| First I like that you captured the action of this bird poised to strike. However, compositionally, the angle from which it was taken in does not capture this bird or action in the best light. The angle was taken too much from an angle behind the bird with the results being that the bird's hind end is more visible AND (more importantly) that the action of the bird poised is broken up by the branch 'disconnecting' his head from his neck. A composition that is taken from an angle that shows the bird in side profile would not break up the action and show off the bird in a more flattering angle, especially the upstretched wings ready to take flight/pounce. |
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09/07/2006 09:16:37 AM |
| Good capture but needs to be sharper. Also, I'm not sure that I care to look at that part of the bird's anatomy. 8) |
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09/06/2006 11:12:54 PM |
| You caught it in a nice unusual pose : ) |
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09/06/2006 09:50:09 PM |
| This is fun. Very nice capture. Just needs a little Pop to it. |
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09/06/2006 12:31:40 PM |
| brilliant calligraphic composition. 8 |
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09/06/2006 08:25:42 AM |
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09/05/2006 08:08:34 PM |
| Good capture. I believe you can improve the sharpness and contrast a bit. |
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09/04/2006 11:12:38 PM |
Technical: contrast could be a little more, the coloring and focus works well...the composition is good too!
Creativity: love the positioning of the bird...and what you have captured!
Score: 8 |
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09/02/2006 10:24:38 PM |
| Great capture! Could be sharper. |
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09/02/2006 03:41:24 PM |
| too OOF. really interesting pose though.5 |
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09/02/2006 08:45:33 AM |
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09/02/2006 03:19:48 AM |
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09/01/2006 09:43:01 AM |
Composition: 6 - The rule of thirds is followed quite well here, but I feel the sticks need a bit of extra space around them to stop it looking cramped.
Technical: 4 - There are some blown out parts, especially on the stock, and the photo appears soft overall.
Creativity: 5 - Its not just the usual bird pose, which is good,
Appeal: 4 - The colours all seem a bit flat, and the blacks arent black, so the appeal isnt really tehre for me. Also, the head going behind the stick is distracting to me.
Overall Calculated Average Score: 5 |
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