I like this photo a lot but it has too much dead space on the right, IMO. I would crop off the RH third of this image (just past where the rays die out) and a bit off the top to put the sunburst BANG on the "rule of thirds" intersection. Then it would be ready to sell in DPC prints and hang on your wall, IMO.
Here is an example of the crop I had in mind (1.25:1) and a bit more Unsharp Mask.
I think this crop makes this shot SUPER dynamic.
Edited for spelling errors.
Message edited by author 2007-02-14 03:44:39. |