Critique Club Review:
Focus appears good, depth of field appears a bit shallow. Color, saturation, and hue are fine, except for the area on the middle left where the lighter part of the clouds are burned out and featureless.
The vegetation along the right would have worked better if it were more into the frame, to frame the photo, or cropped out completly. As it stands, it creates a distraction more than a point of interest.
The major strand of moss is dead center, and essentially cuts the picture in two. If I could reach it and it wassn't illegal, I would have trimmed it off by about half, so it would be a little longer than the strand to its right. Rule of thirds purists would have voted you down for this centering. (I'm not one.) But this is a picture where centering is possibly not the best position. Since I can't see what was out side the frame, I don't know what constraints you were dealing with.
I do like the colors and texture of the clouds. You can almost feel the weather. |
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