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There is a lot of potential in this shot, but the model's position is awkward. She isn't positioned so that any part of her silhouette is properly focused against the sheet. The hands touching the sheet could have provided the point of interest, but they seem a bit off as well. The one hand is curved into a "claw", yet nothing else in the model's position really sells the emotional state that would lead to the hand position (ectasy, pain, fear, anger, etc.) |