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09/14/2006 06:30:15 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Focus and depth of field: Focus is good, depth of field went a bit shallow, resulting in severe softness at the upper tip of the butterly's wing. You did a good job of isolating distracting background, but at the cost of the full sharpnes of the subject. A possible remedy is to either wait until the wings are in a flatter position to minimize the depth of field needed, or to take the picture from a different angle so that less depth of field is required.
A different angle would have hidden the bee, but I do not see the bee as a central player in this story. As it is the bee is partially hidden already.
Color saturation and hue are good. The yellows in the butterfly look a tiny but pale, but it could be that it is just the coloring of this insect. Brightness and contrast are done very well.
As this is an advanced editing challenge, I might have taken the opportunity to darken the light highlites in the background just a bit, to reduce distraction. |
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09/07/2006 08:58:19 AM |
| The blur on the wing closest to us is sorta distracting. otherwise nice shot. |
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09/07/2006 06:11:31 AM |
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09/06/2006 09:44:50 PM |
| nice capture...love the colors! 9 |
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09/05/2006 03:14:45 PM |
| Would of looked better if it had a larger wing span. |
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09/05/2006 01:52:49 PM |
| The colors seem washed out. |
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09/03/2006 10:18:30 AM |
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09/02/2006 09:46:17 PM |
| Well bravo - you resisted following all the rule of thirds and let the background supplement and guide the composition. Glad you resisted bumping the saturation level up too. |
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09/02/2006 12:20:24 AM |
| Nice and crisp with good color. |
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09/01/2006 03:46:47 PM |
| there seems to be an odd long blurry sopt thats distracting , nice colors and bokeh though. |
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09/01/2006 01:11:09 PM |
| Nice picture, but it's really too small. |
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09/01/2006 10:29:35 AM |
| I like the DOF in this but would have like a bit crisper color of the butterfly and flower. (6) |
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09/01/2006 10:18:21 AM |
| lovely bokeh...I like the sharpness against the bg, lovely colour...well done |
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09/01/2006 07:58:53 AM |
| Wonderful colors. Great bokeh. |
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09/01/2006 12:39:27 AM |
| such a gorgeous creature! i love the pastels. nice dof too! 7 |
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