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08/20/2006 06:44:39 PM |
| They both look a little stiff. I think I'd crop in let the couple fill the frame. |
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08/20/2006 05:21:24 PM |
I like the placement of the couple within the setting, and the overall pose. I would have had him turn in toward the bride a little more. For some reason, the faces seen a bit out of focus to me. Could be the distance. The details just don't seem crisp, but that could easily be more from the web resizing.
The light is a little flat and I would warm up the tones just a tiny bit. That's a great spot to catch one with them looking at each other as well.
I like the shot very much, and see only those few places for improvement.
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08/20/2006 04:57:32 PM |
Originally posted by tjbel05:
Im certainly no expert by any means. I love the over all composition of this photo. The only thing I might change is a slight crop to bring them in just a little closer. Thats just a personal preference of mine, does not make it right or wrong. Great Job, Congrats. |
Thinking the same! Great shot |
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08/20/2006 04:55:55 PM |
| Im certainly no expert by any means. I love the over all composition of this photo. The only thing I might change is a slight crop to bring them in just a little closer. Thats just a personal preference of mine, does not make it right or wrong. Great Job, Congrats. |
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08/20/2006 04:24:02 PM |
What is working well here are:
- The pathway lines on the left and right of the couple and how the curve stops right where they are.
- The tree to the left of them.
- The bride being on the right. (had she been on the left, the lines would not have worked so well)
- Her pose with her head tipped towards the groom forming an S-shape with her body
Areas for improvement:
- His left hand is sneaking out behind her, underneath her elbow.
- His stance is a little stiff. (mostly forgiven because I think everyone is more likely to look at her than at him!)
- Where the natural light was fairly flat, a little dodge & burn could add some emphasis to the picture. |
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