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08/31/2006 08:53:55 AM |
| Bold and graphic. Not what you usually see with this type of image, so it's striking. Nice tilt to it. Good job. |
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08/31/2006 01:33:02 AM |
| I like the whole concept: the greens and blues are vibrant love the model's skin tone good job.. loose the weed.. sort of distracting |
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08/28/2006 06:50:33 PM |
I really like the pose and the light. I think that since it is such an edgy background the border works well. Get rid of the weed. Also, I think it is kind of interesting that the outfit and the background seem to be a less than perfect fit...but I don't think it detracts from the photo.
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08/28/2006 04:58:28 PM |
| I like the angel and location. Very hard background against soft model (even though see seems pretty hard). Creative framing. Good work. |
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08/27/2006 10:04:15 PM |
I like the angle for the crop. It certainly gives the image a different feel than if just straight on. I like the colors but they look just slightly over saturated for me.
She obviously has beautiful eyes. I would love to see another shot like this but more of a head shot.
Nice work. |
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08/27/2006 07:07:26 AM |
I agree with the weed needing to go.
I love the background, but for some reason, I feel as if the style of the model's dress dosen't fit with the location and style (grunge look).
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08/27/2006 03:15:24 AM |
A good photograph. And good processing. I think the lighting and focus is good and I love the colors. There are a few distractions that IMO I would fix.
1. The little weed to the left of skirt as mentioned by yanko.
2. Where the paint has been chipped off the door (normally would be good) but in it's location it is competing with the subject. Example: if I try to look at her face my eyes are drawn to that chipped paint area. My mind thinks it's some kind of writing on the wall and wants to read it. If that makes sense.
3. The first thing I seen was her arm behind her looks like it hurts. You can see her veins and muscle tension as she is putting weight on it. you may try to tone down the area from the elbow to the wrist so it will not be so prominent.
I like the border and your processing work. I think you did an over all good job. Especially with colors and composition.
Message edited by author 2006-08-27 03:17:20. |
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08/20/2006 08:05:36 AM |
Nice compositon, pretty girl, I like the green contrasting background. You seem to have lost some of the detail in her hair on the left, and I agree with yanko, the weed's gotta go.
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08/20/2006 02:49:11 AM |
| I like the diagonal composition. The colors and grungy background work well. I'd probably clone out that rouge weed or whatever that thing is by her skirt. |
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