Challenge:Fire II (Advanced Editing IV) Camera:Sony DSC-H1 Location: My kitchen, Glendale Az. Date: Aug 13, 2006 Aperture: f 5.0 ISO: 200 Shutter: 1/20 Date Uploaded: Aug 13, 2006
A sharper focus may have helped, but more than that I think there's a problem with how the flame sort of becomes the background. At least for me, there's not enough of a distinction there. But I do like the composition and concept.
The first thing is it feel real abstract until I see the 5. It is not really in focus and I dont get the feel of fire as I have see from others in this challenge. 5