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Here It Comes!!!
Here It Comes!!!
rossbilly


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Challenge: Stopped Motion III (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 55-200mm f/4.0-5.6G ED
Location: Tennessee River
Date: Aug 5, 2006
Aperture: f5.6
ISO: 220
Shutter: 1/500th
Galleries: Family, Action
Date Uploaded: Aug 6, 2006

 Went out on the river for the day - it was VERY hot, with no breeze at all! Even getting in the water wasnt enough, so two of our girls were trying to stay cool. Brought the new camera, and was able to capture lots of memories. With enough practice, maybe I can earn a little money to pay for all this equipment one day!! If not, at least the grandparents have lots of pics on the wall!!!!!

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Place: 104 out of 212
Avg (all users): 5.4815
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.5867
Avg (non-participants): 5.4123
Views since voting: 846
Views during voting: 293
Votes: 189
Comments: 10
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 08/17/2006 09:42:26 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Billy,

Congratulations on a lovely shot that will no doubt be a great memory for you (and the grandparents). There is a wonderful sense of motion here (stopped of course). I can almost feel the angst and glee of the kids - in that sense the shot is very effective at conveyign this emotion.

The kids expressions are what make this shot so you would have done well to push that. A closer crop, and maybe a bit of contrast and sharpness around the faces could have brought this out a bit more. I would suggest you crop the top, left and right to compose your subject in the top third of the image - centrally composed subjects such as this generally look a bit flat (although not always).

I think you have scored well here with what some might regard as a snap-shot - that is a testement to the character of the shot. Well done.

I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!

Cheers
Paul
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/11/2006 02:53:53 PM
nice idea, but a bit soft and loose. if you were in tight on their faces, you would have had a killer shot.
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 08/08/2006 10:39:08 PM
6 for the hair
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 08/08/2006 05:41:29 PM
Nice hair! :-) Good capture, focus, colours and timing.
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 08/08/2006 01:25:19 PM
Love the hair! How many times have you heard that? It's the first thing I noticed when the image came up. Cute pic. Too bad you couldn't get a nice rooster tail behind the tube or something to add a little punch. May be a bit underexposed (seems like the whites could be brighter)? Good luck in the challenge.
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 08/07/2006 06:38:31 PM
Love the way the hair stands up in this shot. You should trade the bertha in on a Kite tube though. Lots of fun with insane air that will really make for some good action shots! Great capture!
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 08/07/2006 04:39:42 PM
Love the hairdo
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 08/07/2006 02:45:13 PM
This made me laugh! GREAT HAIR-DO's! :)
very cute.
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 08/07/2006 01:43:08 AM
love the hair - thats very funny!
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