This will probably be one of the images to go into my year 12, studio arts folio. My focus statement is as follows. Also, I would appreciate feedback of my proposed focus statement in retrospect of the image.
Focus Statement: Throughout my Design Process I explored with the idea of loneliness, emphasized through a minimalistic view on landscapes. I also explored the concept of loneliness, through crowded cities and the busy lifestyle in which the city provokes.
By further exploring loneliness in landscapes, I hope for my audience to feel overwhelmed by an atmosphere which consumes them through the use of dramatic space and perspective as well as the sublime.
Predominantly I want my images to be landscapes, with few, if any human elements within the compositions. I want the viewer to be the human element within the image.
If I choose to compose a series of panoramas of landscapes or cityscapes, they will all be linked with the theme of loneliness and how the subject matter or lack of subject matter reflects that emotion.
Note: This image is an updated version of my "storm building".