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07/23/2006 04:09:52 AM |
| I'm not much for the light reflection in your eyes or the low angle of your camera. I think just by moving your camera up a tad, more level with your nose or eyes, would make this even better. I do agree about cropping a tad off the left and top. |
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07/23/2006 01:12:22 AM |
| Nice study - low key b/w works well here. I too think the crop could be tighter eliminating some of the negative space on the right |
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07/23/2006 01:03:33 AM |
| not bad. but I would probably crop off some of the top and left, add a little warmth with a color adjustment bringing in a little yellow, and a little sharpening. |
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07/23/2006 01:00:30 AM |
| i really like the low key lighting... would like for your face to move to the left side (rule of thirds and all). i'm not crazy about the pin-point catchlights in your eyes, but it might look unnatural any other way. all in all, it's really a nice study in lighting. :) i'd be proud of it. |
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