I like the framing & composition (if that isnt the same thing :) ) and her expression is very serene. I'd like to see a shot with the model looking towards the camera too, making a connection with the viewer.
I do think the shadows on the left of the picture are too harsh, a softbox to lighten up that side of her face a little would have balanced it more.
I don't hate the background, but I don't feel it adds anything to the shot, I would have preferred a white or black background. In fact, come to think of it, this would look good in mono, I must take a look at it at home when I can check it out in B & W.
Hope I don't seem too picky, I do like the shot and what you've captured a lot.
(edited to add b & w version)
Message edited by author 2006-08-19 18:21:22. |
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