* Greeting from Critique Club *
I think that here you want a representation of a view of the human progress from the nature point of view.
If I understand your idea I think that is a good idea. I am perplexed about the realization. too dark the plants, they occupy too much space in the frame and too much little occupy the bridge. It result that the photograph is too dark. from compositive point of view I think that you can to raise the machine and obtain two good effects, the first is a smallest dark area in the lower frame and the second is the bridge in the left upper corner without to lose the diagonal of the plant.
Best Regards
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