LARF! Hilarious stuff!
I like the gloominess. Something about the rough level of polish gives an authenticity to this pic that might be lost if you had really pushed it hard with a perfect exposure, neat image, dodging and burning such as is common to portraits... It still might do with being a tiny bit sharper and higher contrast in the faces if you wanted to play with it a bit... more for detail than look and feel.
I get a very 'country hill' feeling from the shot... |