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11/26/2006 08:32:51 PM |
| Love this shot. Congrats. I'm new to DPC, but like the sound of point n shoot! |
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10/12/2006 09:35:12 PM |
| Good visual activity. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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07/09/2006 01:54:21 AM |
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - Nice motion blur, a bit too much Neat Image.
The clean blue table top along with the strong lines of the moving balls is perfect for this challenge. I like that the bulk of the exposure was on the rack before the break.
The composition is very nice, too. The eye is lead around the table by all the lines coming from the rack. The only lacking is some other element to show what caused the motion, a queue stick or hand would have added to the context of the image. I think that is perhaps why another shot along the same lines scored a little higher.
Technically the exposure is right on, just long enough to give a good motion effect. The place of the rack in the frame is right along the rule of thirds. I don't always buy into the rule of thirds thing, but it works well here.
A lighter touch on the Neat Image would go a long way. My rule is, if you can tell Neat Image was used, it was probably used too much.
Congratulations on your new personal best! Keep up the strong work.
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David
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07/03/2006 12:42:02 AM |
| nice finish. after you told me i gave you a good review i wondered which one was yours. I still think this is the best of the pool shots. I hope to do as well in my upcoming challenge. |
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07/02/2006 07:01:07 PM |
| To the balls really have a color texture? At first I thought they were wet. nice color, good illustration. |
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07/02/2006 04:47:48 PM |
| "Mediocre Break" is a great photo! The balls seem to have metal flake paint. The colors and action really work for this challenge. |
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07/02/2006 01:55:24 AM |
| This works well. The colours are strong, but plausible (just). The blur doesn't detract from or overwhelm the balls themselves, but just imparts a sense of violent movement from the break. Nicely done. |
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06/29/2006 10:32:23 PM |
| good thing a ball did not jump |
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06/29/2006 10:24:56 PM |
| Great color and composition! |
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06/29/2006 03:48:30 PM |
| This so far is the best pool shot I've seen. The background isn't noisy or grainy--it's smooth and velvety looking. The movement on the balls look great. |
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06/28/2006 08:06:48 AM |
| Ahh...another shot of these balls...but with a very different angle...good work. |
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06/27/2006 09:02:13 PM |
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06/27/2006 07:12:00 AM |
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06/27/2006 06:05:50 AM |
| this one really grabbed me I like the way you have done it |
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06/27/2006 01:39:53 AM |
| Mediocre break, but beautiful shot conveying sharp static images and blurred moving ones. The rail in the lower right is distracting, but the diagonal angle is less so. The rail in the upper right, on the other hand, is just distracting. Maybe you could've pulled the cue ball closer so you could've cropped it out? Those are nitpicks, though; I'm voting 9. :) |
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06/26/2006 09:58:15 PM |
| great work...hope this does well for you |
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06/26/2006 08:11:31 PM |
| Interesting idea for this challenge. I like the colors and the focus on the rack is dead on. Nice job. |
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06/26/2006 07:41:39 PM |
| good blur want more of an angle though |
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06/26/2006 05:57:52 PM |
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06/26/2006 10:06:28 AM |
| But a nice effect, none-the-less. The balls have a sort of marbled pattern. Is that real or some sort of optical effect? Find it a little distracting. 7. |
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06/26/2006 01:41:42 AM |
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06/26/2006 01:31:48 AM |
| qiute an amazing shot, the balls moved,but the break didn't happen.. |
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06/26/2006 01:17:36 AM |
| Yet another standard pool shot...this one doesn't really do much for me. |
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