|Greetings from the Critique Club.
You have received some quite constructive comments from voters, most of which I agree with.
Eschelar has pointed out the character of the shot and I can see from your portfolio that the look that you captured was not accidental and you have captured some strong mood elements. The muted color and grain work very well in this shot and the veil of cloud over the moon adds a focal point
Some areas for potential improvement:
You state in your comments that you couldn't quite get the location that you were after, this tells me that maybe you settled for second best and your score has suffered.
The two light sources compete for attention, it would have improved the composition to keep one or the other but not both
The highlights are a little too harsh IMO. I see that your aperture was quite open, perhaps stopping down would have helped reduce the intensity and still allowed you hit 30 Seconds.
I think that the image would have benefited from a deeper black, silhouetting the trees.
Overall I think this is an interesting photo and meets the challenge, the problem is that often good photos don't particulalrly score highly. Most voters only spend a few seconds on each image and if you don't have the WOW factor they'll click a '4' and move on. Some people also view artifacts like noise as a negative and mark down for this. Noise is not to everyones taste.
Good luck in future challenges and keep up the night photography.