I like this, but I think I would crop out just a bit more off the left--the tree kind of takes away from the model. (I know, this is the Framing challenge and not the Portrait challenge, lol.)
Nice shot, nice model. Unfortunately, I have to guess what the picture looks like as a whole, since it won't all fit on my monitor. This doesn't lower the score, but it is irritating.
I know the maximum size is 640 pixels, but in a vertical shot that means it is too big for many monitors. That's always a tradeoff in vertical shots - a good size versus the inability to take in the whole shot at once.
Fit to Contest: 4 out of 5 - No top frame.
Technical Quality
Exposure/Lighting: 3 out of 5, Model's shirt is too dark for details, model's hair is a little over exposed.
Color/Graysale 5 out of 5, nice color contrast.
Focus/Sharpness 4 out of 5, Left forground tree is out of focus and distracting.
Composition
Crop/Layout 5 out of 5
Elements/Lines 5 out of 5
Scale to 9 7.80 out of 9
Subjective stuff
Interesting subject -1, No offense, cute model.
Rounded total 7
Very nice portrait overall.