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06/26/2006 05:52:31 AM |
Hi guys.
Thx for all your comments and tips, they really help. This is my first submission ever to a photo challenge and it was a nice suprice to get to place 38.
In the future I'll try to remember your tips, thx again.
Live and learn.
Haukur Jo |
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06/25/2006 11:36:57 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Well you can't get more indulgent than that for the common man. :P As coronamv pointed out in his comment, a thicker head would have bumped up the appeal. Also, the focus is off a bit. The lower bubbles are fairly sharp but you are not using a wide enough depth of field. I would bump up the aperture setting to at least F/8 to get more of that rim in focus.
Another thing to consider is shooting at a slightly lower angle so that we don't see the back of the rim at all. That's how you'll see a lot of glass images taken when shot head on like this.
That's pretty much it. I do like the use of negative space here and how you got the glass fading into the background. Really if you just improved the DOF so that more is sharp you would have a higher scoring image. |
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06/19/2006 10:01:05 PM |
| A refreshingly minimalist approach to indulgence -- looks good. |
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06/19/2006 07:25:15 PM |
| this photo seems a bit soft. it's a good image of liquid in a glass otherwise, but the edges just don't seem as crisp as i'd like. nice composition otherwise though |
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06/17/2006 06:48:41 PM |
| [i]Excess is the name of the game[/i You deserve a dozen or more. :-) |
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06/16/2006 04:31:55 PM |
| Follows the KISS principle - definitely a simple idea nicely executed. In my top 20 this challenge. |
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06/15/2006 05:50:50 PM |
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06/15/2006 05:30:08 PM |
| I love the composition but I think it's too dark. |
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06/15/2006 02:11:26 PM |
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06/14/2006 04:27:11 PM |
| good, wish there were more. |
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06/14/2006 12:13:06 PM |
| Needs a thicker head but good idea |
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06/14/2006 04:25:14 AM |
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