Composition: I'd be tempted to pan more the the left, putting the wheel on a third line more.
Technical: Looks pretty dark, and my monitor is well calibrated - I guess some people may see this very dark. :-(
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Nice idea, but a little dark. You could have tried increasing exposure (if possible) or in-camera brightness. Good try.
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This would work in an abstract category for me. I'm not really sure this grabs my attention much. Not much distinction between the darkness and the wheels. the angle is interesting, but maybe not my personal preference. I would much like to have seen a larger portion of this car if it was available. I'm not really sure why we're UNDER the car, looking up, but i supose it makes us think. the bumper is distracting to me, not that that is your fault, but it doesn't seem to fit with the elegance of the rest of the vehicle. Overall technically, I think you did good with the focus and clarity and the color looks to be good as well. Just not really my kind of shot. ~Heather~
This is a pretty cool abstract. I really like the blue on the right fading to black on the left. The lighting of the car could be better but not much you could do with the rules.
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