Camera Work/Technical: Your focus on this one looks a little soft, but I think its more of the white on white than actual focus.
Lighting: I prefer the lighting in the original opposed to this one. I think with your larger aperture on this capture, you lost some great depth of field, as well as some very interesting textures.
Composition/Content: Very interesting composition. The angle you set up, as well as the semi-circle provide the eye with the needed elements to flow around the frame.
My Opinion: I have to respectfully disagree with the voters on this one. I like your lighting and focus in the first one. You had much better contrast and textures before.
Hmmm... this would be a tough one. One one hand, the contrast is great in this shot. However, the original had great textures shown on the egss. It'll be a toss up.
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