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06/13/2006 02:48:43 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Your focus on this one looks a little soft, but I think its more of the white on white than actual focus.
Lighting: I prefer the lighting in the original opposed to this one. I think with your larger aperture on this capture, you lost some great depth of field, as well as some very interesting textures.
Composition/Content: Very interesting composition. The angle you set up, as well as the semi-circle provide the eye with the needed elements to flow around the frame.
My Opinion: I have to respectfully disagree with the voters on this one. I like your lighting and focus in the first one. You had much better contrast and textures before.
Eric
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06/12/2006 11:48:56 PM |
Great clarity on a hard to shoot color. |
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06/12/2006 11:32:40 PM |
Hmmm... this would be a tough one. One one hand, the contrast is great in this shot. However, the original had great textures shown on the egss. It'll be a toss up. |
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06/10/2006 12:27:13 AM |
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06/08/2006 11:10:32 PM |
simple, clear, and sharp. I like it! |
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06/08/2006 12:24:17 AM |
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06/06/2006 01:10:49 PM |
Simplistic and 'zen like'.
Good shot, but i just can't help thinking a more interesting shot lay with the eggs somewhere (pun intended, :P). |
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06/06/2006 12:56:17 PM |
I like the look of this white on white. The shadows are nice and its so clean and sharp. Great job. |
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06/06/2006 07:48:06 AM |
nice shades and sharpness |
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