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I'm serious, Eye was framed
I'm serious, Eye was framed
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Take Two (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D50
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: backyard
Date: Jun 5, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 400
Shutter: 4000
Galleries: Water, Self Portrait
Date Uploaded: Jun 5, 2006

just under deadline so not too much time to explain, this is from my refraction of light challenge, called Eye was framed. I received commments about being out of focus and that I should have had more color in the picture. Post processing, made the picture not as I expected, abit harsher, but this was the only time I could take the pic and PP. Ill post a link so you can see after the challenge no more time.AHHHH!

Statistics
Place: 53 out of 161
Avg (all users): 6.1905
Avg (commenters): 7.8333
Avg (participants): 6.0294
Avg (non-participants): 6.3000
Views since voting: 1195
Views during voting: 339
Votes: 168
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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06/13/2006 02:39:49 PM
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Great focus on the water, but I think that I prefer the original with more water and a bit more shallow depth of field.

Lighting: You lighting is a bit harsh. The shadows on the left and the highlights on the right contrast a bit too much for my personal taste.

Composition/Content: Definitely another great capture, but, as I mentioned above, I think you need more of the water in the frame.

My Opinion: Reading back through the comments on your last one, you did exactly what the voters asked, and they scored you lower. I think both images are very nice and creative, but I prefer the original.

Eric
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/12/2006 11:35:31 PM
Oooh, now that was a tough one to reshoot I'm sure. I like the splash of color in this one, much more vibrantwith the orange and blue contrasting in the water. I also like how you are more in focus. Very cool and bumping up cause I know this had to be hard, especially to get a shot framing the eye again. :)
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06/12/2006 10:40:18 PM
Another good capture here Joe. Perosnally I preferred the original. I think the capture of the water was better as far as position, but the color of your shirt in this one may bring out a tad more interest in the reflection. Good shot overall and bumping up 1.
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06/12/2006 09:28:34 PM
For the life of me I can't find the original on this one. I remember it and I know this one is much better but I like comparing them if possible. This is very well done and I would love to know how you did it. I'm guessing mirror? An 8 to start but bumping to a 9 because I know it's a really nice improvement over the original :)
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06/12/2006 02:45:36 PM
Nice idea, like the outcome!
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06/10/2006 07:44:30 PM
I liked the original...but this one seems to have more appeal. The stare and the shirt colour.
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06/10/2006 01:32:48 AM
Great reshoot dude! How you manage to capture the sharpness in the water is beyond me :) Great job.
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06/08/2006 06:45:59 PM
Odd title, but quite a good photo. I like the colors and the low sunlight.
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06/07/2006 08:04:50 PM
Excellent.....
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06/07/2006 04:08:04 PM
Bumping up to a 10 because I just love it.
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06/06/2006 09:54:15 AM
Wow! The stop-action water is great... but that guy in the background scares me! ;-)
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06/06/2006 09:39:16 AM
haven't we seen this before?
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06/06/2006 09:08:32 AM
better the second time around...well done! I have a water shot for the green challenge and they are HARD to do...as I found out, you get drenched and make a mess and shoot 300 frames for one good shot, so well done
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06/06/2006 12:11:53 AM
Heh, one I remember!! This is cool.
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