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06/15/2006 05:36:13 PM |
** Critique Club **
When I first look at the image, I am confused as what is the 'green' you wanted to show? Is it the caterpillar or the green background ?
You have a great shot of caterpillar here, but the background doesn't go very well with it. I find the left top portion too distracting. If you could capture the subject from an angle to avoid the white background and may be able to keep the background all green, a green on green picture, that could have been great.
A few things that I think can improve the existing picture is sharpening after resizing. also you could tone down some of the red in the background.
Overall, a good subject choice, but background distracts the viewer.
If you have any questions, please feel free to pm me.
thanks,
Gaurawa |
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06/12/2006 04:46:20 AM |
| Just green enough for me to love. |
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06/11/2006 03:11:14 AM |
| Cute catapiller.....Love his green stripes... |
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06/09/2006 12:08:05 AM |
| hey great pattern. But what is that white thing in the background? quite distracting. If the background were uniform, this would have made a superb picture |
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06/08/2006 09:34:36 PM |
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06/07/2006 08:53:11 AM |
| not too much in the way of greens here. |
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