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Nikor Mud Cut (no grass) lens cap contest
Nikor Mud Cut (no grass) lens cap contest
Kronus


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Take Two (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D70s
Lens: Nikon AF Micro-Nikkor 60mm f2.8D
Location: Welland
Date: May 31, 2006
Aperture: f6.3
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Macro, Action
Date Uploaded: May 31, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 102 out of 161
Avg (all users): 5.6335
Avg (commenters): 7.2500
Avg (participants): 5.5000
Avg (non-participants): 5.7363
Views since voting: 878
Views during voting: 261
Votes: 161
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0

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 06/13/2006 06:22:09 PM
From the Critique Club

I have taken a few hours to look at your take two picture and the original. I see that the original scored higher than your second shot. Even though your take two shot is technically good. Good focus, macro, and lighting.

IMO I believe you went for to tight of a crop. The lens cap seems to be forced into our face and takes up the majority of the page. Elements that were in the first photograph that made your picture look more realistic is omitted in this photograph and I believe that hurt your score some.

IMO a more open crop showing some of the vehicles wheel components and maybe part of the fender would of made this a great shot.

Keep up the good work and I hope you find the critique helpful. If you have any questions feel free to contact me.
regards,
SDW
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/12/2006 09:27:09 PM
Kronus, Hahaha, no grass, dang and here I wanted to get high! Just kidding. Okay, found the original in the Lens Cap Challenge and without a doubth is is an improvement but I think you cropped in just a bit too tight this time. No grass is very good but I would have liked to seen a little more tire tread and also the Nikon tilted the other way, not sure why but it's probably just me, LOL The original got a 6, this one gets an 8 :)
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 06/10/2006 12:16:33 AM
Hehehehe...well done.
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 06/07/2006 02:25:25 AM
Excellent, and better than the origional.....
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 06/06/2006 01:42:59 AM
This seems famililar ... nice shot .. good lines ..
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