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06/13/2006 04:40:45 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great focus, as well as a very nice depth of field. I really like the crispness on the nose of the boat face and the nicely blurred background that you can see through the cracked bow.
Lighting: Your lighting looks a little flat and hazy in this one. Looking at the previous entry, it appears that these shots were taken either at different times of the day or with vastly different cloud cover conditions. I think a slight s-curve adjustment on a curves layer would have upped the contrast and pulled some of the murky haze out of the image.
Composition/Content: While I do find the centered composition appealing for this capture, I prefer the angled composition of the original entry. This particular composition puts some limitations on how the viewer's eye flows around the frame.
My Opinion: This is another nice capture, but I agree with the voters. The original entry was a bit better.
Eric
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06/10/2006 12:35:26 AM |
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06/08/2006 06:42:09 PM |
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06/07/2006 08:30:03 AM |
| I like it, as it has a quirky feel to the image... |
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06/06/2006 12:58:29 AM |
| Love the "remake" title! Colors are great! 9 |
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