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Beauty by Candlelight...
Beauty by Candlelight...
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Single Light Source II (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Lacey, WA
Date: May 28, 2006
Aperture: f/4.5
ISO: 800
Shutter: 6.0
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: May 30, 2006

 The model looks tired... well because it was about 1AM. The light is done by a candle which she is reaching for. Lowered the amount of Red, Yellow, and Magenta, sharpened, and adjusted levels.

Model: Jessica Vargas

Statistics
Place: 100 out of 238
Avg (all users): 5.6599
Avg (commenters): 7.1000
Avg (participants): 5.2143
Avg (non-participants): 5.8362
Views since voting: 769
Views during voting: 356
Votes: 247
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0

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 06/09/2006 10:23:33 PM
From the Critique Club

Very nice pose and composition along with good warm tone. I think you did good with the set up and processing. Even though the soft focus is good I think the eyes would of been better if they were in focus because they make the picture. Your model is speaking volumes with her eyes making me want to know what she is looking at and thinking.

Being that this was an advanced editing challenge I feel you could of used a few more tool available to enhance your photograph. Such as selective sharpening and more.

Overall I think your photograph is very good with a little more tweaking could of been great. It does show that you are a very capable photographer showing your ability to compose the photograph is such a good light.

Keep up the good work and take advantage of advanced editing when able to bring out the wow factors in your photograph. I know it scored in the mid 5's but your photograph has the elements to be a 6+ photograph.

I also feel you did a great job meeting the challenge and the title is good. I hope you find the critique helpful. If you have any questions feel free to contact me.

Thanks,
SDW
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/06/2006 12:52:55 AM
Lovely model, rich colors, pleasing contrast and lighting. Well done!
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 06/05/2006 04:30:59 AM
dreamy
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 06/03/2006 03:20:40 PM
A difficult light source well done.....9
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 06/02/2006 10:29:35 PM
pretty eyes! 9
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 06/02/2006 04:42:58 PM
sweet pose
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 05/31/2006 07:36:12 PM
very nice.
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 05/31/2006 04:41:04 PM
She's cute!
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 05/31/2006 11:35:32 AM
The title is right
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 05/31/2006 04:40:55 AM
Beautiful face and nice warm glow. Hope this does well for you.8.
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 05/31/2006 04:27:39 AM
Nice composition. The color balance seems a bit off though.
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